Shot final lines and colouring

Here are two more shots which i have finished recently. I think i have been working quite efficiently to get one shot a days final lines and colouring done over the easter break. 

What i think went well:

• I think there is consistency between the animation in mine and Olivers shots and they work well together
• I think my attempt at a smear works well in the shot with the mother and the priest. 
• With colour i think the characters sit well in the backgrounds and feel it brings the animation to life

What could be improved:

• in the daughter reaction shot, the blanket lines are a bit jittery and move around more as it was hard to keep this the exact same in different frames. I am going to fix this for the final film
• her hands also clip with the blanket a bit, which again i plan on fixing for the final film
• the motion of the mother stepping forward could be more clear, i would like to tweak the planting of her feet for the final cut