Blind Date storyboard

I have decided the story for my 'Make Em Laugh' animation will be the endeavour of a blind date -the fruit- to escape the supermarket where he is imprisoned. I have drawn out a loose storyboard below. The story begins with a wide shot of the supermarket fruit and veg section to establish the scene, and will show the dates journey to try and escape; he punches his way out of the box and heroically slides down a rope, dodging trollies as he tries to find his way out. Eventually he gets to the door and gazes out in amazement before the automatic doors chop him in half. Hopefully this last shot of the animation will cement the 'funny' side of the animation if the idea of the 'blind date' pun doesnt.